tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post6264435312264071354..comments2009-12-25T20:56:25.983+13:00Comments on Extreme Team 14: Survivor: Ultimate Africa. By CameronPete Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05322665932077436836noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-63893179604157449632009-10-15T09:34:36.897+13:002009-10-15T09:34:36.897+13:00Oliver
I think that was a realy grat storey.
My f...Oliver<br /><br />I think that was a realy grat storey.<br />My faverit part was when they crased.Extreme Team 14https://www.blogger.com/profile/10887491784316660562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-39509165045985349162009-10-15T09:30:17.814+13:002009-10-15T09:30:17.814+13:00Wow thanks guys! That was some really nice comment...Wow thanks guys! That was some really nice comments <br />once again thanks.<br /><br />CAMERONExtreme Team 14https://www.blogger.com/profile/10887491784316660562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-38585321158235082282009-10-15T09:28:02.092+13:002009-10-15T09:28:02.092+13:00Wow thanks guys! That was some really nice comment...Wow thanks guys! That was some really nice comments <br />once again thanks.<br /><br />CAMERONExtreme Team 14https://www.blogger.com/profile/10887491784316660562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-3124537586738500532009-10-15T09:20:00.474+13:002009-10-15T09:20:00.474+13:00Your story is quet poular i am jelous i cant wait ...Your story is quet poular i am jelous i cant wait till mr hall makes us do another narrative any way cant wait to see some more stories.Extreme Team 14https://www.blogger.com/profile/10887491784316660562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-49914839614130023802009-09-23T16:36:27.526+12:002009-09-23T16:36:27.526+12:00wow camron i love your story it was very catchy an...wow camron i love your story it was very catchy and it definalty hooked me in. You are a great writer and anybody who reads yoyr story will absolutly gat blown away. Once again i love your story.<br /><br />SanayaSanayahttp://extremeteam14.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-32008297228652133092009-09-21T18:10:28.130+12:002009-09-21T18:10:28.130+12:00What an awesome story you have written Cameron. I...What an awesome story you have written Cameron. I will be honest with you and tell you that because it is so long I was going to skim read over it, but you ready had me gripped by the plot.<br />I loved the words you used, the way you varied the lengths of your sentences, and the way you built suspense.<br />And I loved Dad finding the rib of a dead animal - very practical indeed.<br /><br />Keep publishing your work.<br />Mrs BurtMrs Burthttp://pestorekat.blogspot.com/2009/09/tinkerbell-time.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2533227000720525994.post-81248489050565441142009-09-21T17:57:11.201+12:002009-09-21T17:57:11.201+12:00O my goodness Cameron. That was some narrative - ...O my goodness Cameron. That was some narrative - there could be a future novelist in there! Well done.<br /><br />Mrs Beavis (office)zesprihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14269118297042559856noreply@blogger.com