Friday, March 20, 2009

Dentist Drama By Neha

Mum said I had to go to the dentist at 2 o-clock. Lot's of tension was going on. Luckily I had loads of time left before I went! I climbed into the car and mum drove me and my little sister to school in seconds. Time was going by really quickly. My temper was growing bigger and bigger until it was bigger than a dinosaur! Tick,tock,tick,tock..It was 1:00. One more hour before I needed to go to the horrifying dentist. Soon it was lunch at 1:55.

Tension and temper was building as high as a sky scraper! The clock said only 5 minutes left so mum was on her way to pick me up for the dentist at her lunch break! I grabbed my lunch box and sat in front of the class room and slowly opened my lunch box while SCREAMING in my head! Four minutes went by I decided to go early so everything would be done quickly.

Mum picked me up from the office. While I climbed into the car my mum signed her name in the school book. Off we go to the dentist. I was thinking 'What if they pull out my wobbly tooth?' I remembered that mum explained that the dentist is only going to only to put in fillings. "phew" I sighed out loud by mistake. Luckily mum didn't notice.

At last we made it to the dentist. "Oh no'' I cried.. because of the WAITING ROOM!! I have always hated the waiting room. All you do is sit and worst of all read old magazines which is not fun at all! After all that waiting it was my turn There I was on the chair getting checked from the dentist and listening to what the dentist was saying to Mum. All of a suddenly I heard it. I herd the dentist say the 7 words!?
"I will take out only one TOOTH!!!!!!"

I was horrified. I had thought nothing bad would happen. That means my night mare came true! I was screaming, shouting and howling all in my head. What can I do? Ok, now I knew everything was bad. What was that? Oh No it was an injection. She poked it into my gum. Luckily she had put my gum to sleep so there was only a little bit of pain.

The dentist took out a special tool. She washed it and fitted the metal thing in my tooth and started pulling harder and harder I felt like sitting up and saying "BACK OFF!!" but instead I squeezed my mums hand. CRACK! POP! "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh." I lost it. I lost my favourite tooth. "There you go." Said the dentist, like she didn't even care. I tried talking to my mum "abzohmkopffog" came out of my mouth !!

There I was on the chair crying, screaming, shouting and howling in my head. I got to chose 2 stickers I said "thenlk yolu " To the dentist.

At last I reached home. it took an hour for me to talk clearly. And I never wanted to go to the dentist ever again.


Sanaya said...

Ouch that must have hurt reaaly badly. Now you gave me the creeps of going to the dentist I never want to go there again. By the way great story there was lots of tension building inside me.


J Hall said...

Yikes Neha! Love your REALLY ENERGETIC story! All that stuff in your head! Anyone who has had a tooth pulled at the dentist knows
THAT feeling. Thanks for putting it into such great words!

Becca said...

Wow Neha! What a great story! You made ME feel afraid!

Anonymous said...

Thanks sanaya it was creepy!


Noor said...

nice story NeHa I like that you put lots of tension in the story